Nice - a lot said in a few words :)
A happy ending indeed!
Sweetly said..can you please read me the end again?
very inspiritional - thank you!!!
True, simple things like dusk and dawn hold a happy ending everytime :)
A very skillful piece of writing. You got your message across in so few words - any more would have added nothing
This proves that the best gifts come in small packages. Your short poem didn't need another word to express the happiness of a bright new day.
So small and so poignant...beautiful...
Oooh, this is good! Makes me remember how excited I've always felt about going to Heaven someday!
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