Attraction...
eyes met
conversations flowed
at ease with each other
Just a few nights
some special moments
time stood still
I was in love...
The moment I knew
I had fallen in love
is the moment I knew
I needed to say
"goodbye"
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eyes met
conversations flowed
at ease with each other
Just a few nights
some special moments
time stood still
I was in love...
The moment I knew
I had fallen in love
is the moment I knew
I needed to say
"goodbye"
***
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8 comments:
Somehow it made me sad..
unconnected moments
yes gautami tripathy .. it's a sad poem...
I hope when you go visit other "island writers" you'll find some more upbeat moment...
Had a catch at my throat at the end.. lovely poem.
Moment
Darn. Yup, I get those, too! Would be nice if we could all have happies without the grims...
i hope what ever you passed that up for was worth it... or is worth it if that is the case......
Why did you walk away? A moment as precious as this, why did you have to let go? I hope you get to meet again..thanks.
UL
What a beautiful poem Wonder what went wrong
a sad or happy moment will always be remembered. after all life is a good teacher right?
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