Tuesday, December 11, 2007

The Moment

Attraction...
eyes met
conversations flowed
at ease with each other

Just a few nights
some special moments
time stood still
I was in love...

The moment I knew
I had fallen in love
is the moment I knew
I needed to say
"goodbye"


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8 comments:

gautami tripathy said...

Somehow it made me sad..

unconnected moments

Liza's Eyeview said...

yes gautami tripathy .. it's a sad poem...

I hope when you go visit other "island writers" you'll find some more upbeat moment...

Preethi said...

Had a catch at my throat at the end.. lovely poem.
Moment

tumblewords said...

Darn. Yup, I get those, too! Would be nice if we could all have happies without the grims...

paisley said...

i hope what ever you passed that up for was worth it... or is worth it if that is the case......

UL said...

Why did you walk away? A moment as precious as this, why did you have to let go? I hope you get to meet again..thanks.

UL

Marja said...

What a beautiful poem Wonder what went wrong

totomai said...

a sad or happy moment will always be remembered. after all life is a good teacher right?